Why it is a good idea to have pets!

We have been having a go at writing a piece of persuasive writing. 

Here is my piece of writing about why we should have pets.

Title A Short Statement about the topic. eg. ‘Rugby League Is A Great Sport’	Pets Are Awesome
Overview/ Statement of position A brief statement of your view about the topic.  What you believe or want to argue.	It is totally a good idea to have pets!!!
Series of Arguments Reasons Your points supporting your view about the topic.  Your arguments to support your statement and information to support these arguments. Remember -argument -supporting detail, reasons, examples	Firstly pets make you smile like when they achieve something. They are loving little cute creatures you need to have pets I strongly advise you to!! when you get home from school or work it is nice to see your pet, it gets pretty lonely when you're not around
	Secondly, another reason why you should have pets is because cats can hunt and keep mice and rats away from your house. Dogs  can be trained to hunt wild animals like pigs and deer. In some countries dogs are trained to look after sheep farms so the wolves don't attack the sheep.
	Thirdly. When you are very sick and there's a slight chance that you think you might have cancer, dogs can sniff out cancer for you. Dogs are very important to a blind person because they can guide the blind person around and make the person happy because they can get out of the house and do some normal things. Pets can comfort people who have sad things happen to them.
	Finally, I think it is good idea to have pets because they can get you up and moving for exercise, and dogs love exercise. Some pets don’t need exercise but having one that does gets you of the couch and out moving.
Concluding statement Summing it up.  A summary of your arguments and your view on the topic.	In conclusion I strongly believe that everybody should have pets because they make us smile, they keep mice away from our homes and keep us fit. For these reasons everybody that doesn’t  get allergies should have a pet.