Tuesday, 14 November 2017

Quick wrights term 4.

We have been working on Quick writes. This is where you are given some thing to wright
about (a writing prompted) and you only have 10 minutes to write as much as possible using 
this writing prompted. For our writing prompts we will use either images or shot videos.

1) Spider man!


Spider man!
As I walked into the city of New york you could feel
the calm cool wind as it hit me. It was calm and cool but
all of sudden a train came flying past me and spiderman leaped
of the train, flop he got squashed under the train and smudged on the train tracks! The people in the train didn't even care. No more spider man!



IMG_1464.JPG


2)  A Stormy Day.

As I walked outside the house I could feel the cool gust of wind blowing me away and the heavy rain bulking my eye sight. Suddenly  crash, bash boom,creek thunder and lightning started to appear also the outdoor furniture started to get bashed around. I rushed inside to make sure I wouldn't get struck by the lighting but it sounded like the roof was going to fall off! All of a sudden shatter, the glass shattered I went to see what was going on when the heavy rain was getting in I didn’t know what to do I just grabbed a sheet and covered it but it didn't work!!!!!!!!!
Image result for stormy day

Tomato fight.

Tomato fight  is a fun event held in Spain where people throw tomatoes at each other. Some people wear goggles To protect their eyes from the squirt of the tomato juice. Just imagine the Icky pulp of the tomato squeezing between your feet and the tomato seeds stuck in your hair. Being covered in tomatoes is isn't so bad maybe you should try it one day!        

IMG_1463.JPG

        


1 comment:

  1. Nevey, you have done well with your quickwrites, next time you could use some Te Reo words. Poor Spiderman, no one cared.

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.